REVIEW 1
UNIVERSITY OF NEW
FACULY OF THE BUILT ENVIRONMENT
BENV2402 2008-S2
Design Modeling – Time Based Visualisation
S2 2008 RC2033/2034, Level 2 Computer Labs
STAFF CONTACT: Jeremy Harkins jeremyh@fbe.unsw.edu.au
Project 1 Fence Animation
student name: Chung Fui Kiat Student Number: 3205163
VIDEO:
1] Narrative/Thematics
Theoretical framework and the strength of initial investigation
Story boarding, visual research, testing of ideas and initial investigation into max
8/10
Comments:
Very well demonstrated. I like the idea of repetition and mesh. However the exploration of mesh is not quite shown in the video.
2] Max Component
Complexity of form and motion. Conceptualization of source imagery/documentation, testing methods and processes of form generation etc.
8/10
Comment
Excellent choice of artwork. Kind of having experience in different dimension. Would it be nice to have lighting effect in the animation.
3] Video Editing Component
Structure of narrative, background/foreground resolution, integration of source images, text and sound into animation. Resolution/readability of work and concepts.
7/10
Comments:
Nicely done. Perhaps fading in and out would help the transition between the clips smoother.
Misc comments:
Great job.
